A woman with a broken dream.
A competition…He even makes me forget my name. One night was all it took, and I forgot everything and anything except the sexy fighter in the ring who sets my mind ablaze and my body on fire with wanting…Remington Tate is the strongest, most confusing man I’ve ever met in my life.He’s the star of the dangerous underground fighting circuit, and I’m drawn to him as I’ve never been drawn to anything in my life. I forget who I am, what I want, with just one look from him. When he’s near, I need to remind myself that I am strong–but he is stronger. And now it’s my job to keep his body working like a perfect machine, his taut muscles primed and ready to break the bones of his next opponents . . .But the one he’s most threatening to, now, is me.
I want him. I want him without fear. Without reservations.
If only I knew for sure what it is that he wants from me?
From the moment he lays eyes on Brooke, Remy is hooked. Brooke is instantly attracted to the face and form but resists the lust because she doesn’t know the man. I liked very much that Remy wanted her to know him before taking things to the next level – even though, after not very long, this is a huge source of frustration to Brooke.
He grabs my wrists and angrily yanks me forward, pinning my arms down. “Why’d you want to have sex with me? To have a fucking adventure? What was I supposed to be? Your one-night-fucking stand? I’m every woman’s adventure, damn you, and I don’t want to be yours. I want to be your fucking REAL. You get that? If I fuck you, I want you to belong to me. To be mine. I want you to give yourself to me—not Riptide!”
The sexual tension builds and builds until it is not only Brooke who is frustrated. For me, it went on just a titch too long and briefly crossed the fine pleasure/pain line.
When they finally do get down to it, oh boy. It’s messy and intense and compelling. All that frustration released in a huge cloud of steaming steaminess.
For the most part the sex scenes were hot as all get out but there were some words/phrases that made me wince a little – “little kitten”, “fissure” (this is not a sexy word in my opinion) and “he scrapes my inner channel” just sounds painful (- scraping being something I associate with a pap smear and hence, ouch and not sexy). These are small niggles though. (Also, biceps is always plural /end niggle).
At the end, I both did and did not understand Brooke’s actions. I don’t want to give away any spoilers but after all the build up, I thought Remy deserved more from her. On the other hand, things are messed up. With a capital messed and up.
Brooke’s protectiveness of her little sister Nora was powerful but I found it difficult to connect with Nora as she wasn’t a very well realised character for me. And her turn around seemed remarkably speedy. Again – this might be further addressed in the second and/or third books.
Remy is such an alpha-carer that when he decides Brooke is his to care for, that includes her friends and family too – and I liked that as much as he wanted Brooke to be “his” and only his, he didn’t try to cut her off from her loved ones – in fact, he went to considerable effort and expense to do just the opposite.
The fight sequences are gritty and raw and visceral and mirror in many ways the relationship between the two protagonists.
Still, Remy has darkness in him and I think Brooke’s relationship with him is not without risk and I don’t think she has a handle on it at all (which I thought showed her immaturity). Could make for interesting reading in the future!
I didn't like this one really. Brooke was too immature for me and I don't think Remy's illness was fleshed out enough. And the whole sister thing? huh?I dunno. Maybe I need a second book to understand things more.
@Mandi – There were parts of it that worked really well for me and other parts not so much. I didn't like the way the mental illness was handled – that just seemed unsafe and unhealthy to me but I'm no expert. The sister thing needed a lot more exposition IMO. But I did like the connection between Remy and Brooke.I am getting a little tired of the latest style of 3 books to tell the one story (a la 50, Crossfire, etc.) But I'll probably read the next one in this series and see how I feel from there.